How to Write a Terrible Sex Story - Sex Stories

How to Write a Terrible Sex Story

... a sex toy as if that's totally normal, every female character wanting sex, nobody being jealous throughout this, a black girl whose literal character revolves around her being black (in the sex scene, I'm not making this up, only two to three of her lines don't outline the fact that she's black and he's white. As he screws her she mays as well be panting "I'm black! I'm black!") with no other definable trait, categorizing girls by nothing but cultural background (and some offensive stereotypes, like all Asians being submissive), blatant fat-shaming, and as if that wasn't enough, the protagonist then deciding to fuck his own mom literal days after his dad leaves the family, leading to a flimsy set of events involving a sun tan lotion cliche where suddenly his mom has the hots for him. Good grief. This was just from me scanning the thing. 800 000+ views, 93% rating. For a racist, objectifying, sex-centric, paper-thin, horribly written story. In case you're not convinced, the comments by the author are a treat, where he both calls people assholes for implying he stole ideas yet accuses other writers of stealing ideas, and literally posted the comment "If MY woman bitched that much about sucking my dick I'd strip her naked, ditch her in a biker bar, and call her sister for some action..." Stellar. Just stellar. Remember that my story which involved a fifteen-year-old got banned, and his didn't. Please, if ever you need to remind your self what you should aim to NOT write, look ...

... no further than this offensive, poorly written, character-lacking train wreck. Source: "I'm hot for my older sister" by undercoverman1 Yes, I am very bitter. Glad you could tell. In case you think this is an anti-incest tangent, it isn't. My personal feelings about incest aside, it can be done well. "I Lust My Sister Meridian" by Lustn4sis for a sex-centric story is well-written. Why did I give this a pass and not others? For one, right off the bat the focus of the story is laid out as sex. What's the conflict? Immediately you know it: Jason's lust for his sister is consuming him. Back story is given, the build-up is gradual, and characters are kind of well written. Beyond half-way through, it goes to shit, but the first half I imagine for a sex-centric story is written really well. Source: "I Lust my Sister Meridian" by Lustn4sis There are cliches in stories one should avoid as well when doing a porn story. A few have been touched on, like the flimsy events that lead to a girl previously uninterested in a guy having the hots for him. Don't get me wrong - I'm still learning. To an extent, I'm guilty of this. Other things like always making the protagonist very attractive (usually males with athletic builds at 5'10 or higher with 7+ inch long dongs)... Overdone. And thanks for describing him in vivid detail in the first few paragraphs. I totally needed to know upfront how big his penis was. Otherwise, how could I visualize the sex scene that came dozens of paragraphs later? Oh, ...