How to Write a Terrible Sex Story - Sex Stories

How to Write a Terrible Sex Story

... story. Is it bad porn? Who knows. Is it a bad porn story? Yes. Again, not denouncing the creator as a writer, just... don't write a book. I hate stories that have close to zero plot. The idea of a sex-centric story crushing realism and actual plot leads me to another point which is no doubt going to earn me a few extra downvotes: The Devil's Pact is too sex-centric for me to consider it a good story. It has everything I cited: A progressing plot, unique characters, status, and it's well-written. And yet sex is not a novelty. Go ahead, name any one prominent female character in five seconds who doesn't have sex eventually in the story. Each scene, let alone chapter, is peppered with sex. I could excuse this if it was just during Mark and Mary's scene, but it's during almost every scene. Gabriel has weird god-sex with the nuns, the devil and Lilith have this sexual tension thing happening, literally everyone has sex at some point. In the side story 'Mark Goes Back to School", the one place you'd think sex is a novelty to some, a couple female friends whom Mark decides to take over reveal they've already been having lesbian sex for a while. All novelty in the scene was gone. Suddenly there's no point in making them do obscene things if they already would have, I thought. Then I realized I was reading a story about an adult male going to a high school to force minors to have sex with him, so I quietly shut off my computer and thought about how much of a monster I am. Sources: ...

... "The Adventures of John and Holly" by John Morrison "The Devil's Pact" by mypenname3000 (emphasis on side story "Mark Goes Back To School") The topics of gradual character building and realism creep into the next topic: Incest. DISCLAIMER: I hate incest. I think it's gross. I don't actively search it out to read it. I'm a biased source, so take anything I say about this with a grain of salt. Incest is by far the worst culprit of sudden sex scenes. I hate the overused phrase, "I never saw my sister sexually" in these stories, because the protagonist just spent the last two paragraphs describing his own sister's chest and butt to me in weird detail. Firstly, clearly you did, bro. Secondly, if this is so, how'd a few events as flimsy as discovering your brother whacking off (Hey there, Best Sister in The World), coming out of the pool with an erection (What's up, My Sis Is Irresistible) or finding a porno mag and suddenly being cool with experimenting until your cousin's freaking sister bursts in and is for some reason totally cool with the events and decides to join in (How's it going, 3 Cousins) manage to carry that much weight? If there's gonna be incest, at least make it make sense. Make it gradual (Sharing my Room with Sis is a good example) or make it pre-existing to the events of the story (again I cite She is the One). Don't just make it appear out of nowhere! Is that hot? That's up to interpretation. Is it good storytelling? In no sense of the word. It's not a good story. ...