Harry Potter Promise NR.13 - Sex Stories

Harry Potter Promise NR.13

... Susan, who bumped into Ron, who stumbled into Harry. They all took a few steps, and looked over at the disturbance, relieved to see that it was Neville. Around them, the battle picked up once more, students and professors determined to neutralize the threat. Harry could see Minerva several meters away, battling a man he was pretty sure was called Rowle. She glanced at him briefly, and he was startled to see tears in her eyes. She nodded, just once, and Harry knew that their time was up. Voldemort was slowly making his way towards Harry. Harry looked at his friends. "We have to leave," he said urgently. "There's no more time to find the others. Everyone grab onto me." They all did so, confused, and a moment later, disappeared from the station at Hogsmeade. Please don't hate me! To be honest, a lot of this chapter was unplanned; I really wasn't sure where I was going to go when I started writing this. But I've had many reviews over the course of this series, that berate me for having everything turn out all sunshine and roses. Telling me how in a real war, not everyone survives. So if you're upset, blame them! When I wrote this chapter, I believe I had just received a review telling me how it wasn't believable, because everything was going Harry's way. I think that's why I had things go as they did, here. In all honesty, those reviewers are right: in a real war, not everyone survives. I'm trying to make this as believable as it can be, so I apologize if I fall short at times. I ...

... am not a professional writer, and I'm doing the best I can. _ _ _ Chapter 12 I know not everyone was pleased with the way the last chapter went, and I am sorry if some of you hate the direction I've gone in, but I did have a reason for it, and it's not because I just like killing characters (I'm not Rowling!). I have dropped several lines about Harry wanting Dumbledore to see him finish Voldemort, his way, and wanting to put the old man in his place, but the truth is, I just couldn't redeem him. I've tried, many times over the last few stories, but I just couldn't get him to come around in a way that didn't sound completely gaudy and fake. Could any of you see him stepping back and letting Harry and his friends bring the wizarding world into the twentieth century? Hey, at least you can't say you saw it coming! I think. Disclaimer: I own nothing The group appeared just as suddenly as it had disappeared, in a large and grand entryway. Hermione looked around her with interest and curiosity. "What was that?" she asked. "It didn't feel like a portkey." Harry made the ring visible, and showed it to his friends. "This is the Gryffindor lordship ring. It acts as a portkey, but it makes for a much smoother ride." He gestured to the area around him. "This is Lion's Castle, which I inherited through the Gryffindor line. It's completely unplottable, and besides Sirius and Aunt Minerva, we're the only people who know it exists." Susan looked close to crying. "Is there any way we can find ...