Who To Pick Chap.1 (Overhauled Version) - Sex Stories

Who To Pick Chap.1 (Overhauled Version)

As this is my first story, I don't have much experience in writing erotic stories. (Duh.) I would also like positive AND negative feedback, along with constructive comments to help me out. Thanks. I am also thinking of hopefully making this into a sort of series, so if you guys enjoy, I just might. Who to pick? How'd it happen you ask? Well, that's quite the interesting story. It all REALLY started 5 years ago. I was 12 then, and well I had an idea of what sex was, I didn't exactly know how to put all the 'pieces' together. That night it was probably around 1 a.m. and I was just traveling back to my room when a I heard a gasp or a moan of some sort, catching me off guard. Being my scaredy-cat self, I jumped at the sound, shivers running down my spine. And then I heard it again, this time a bit louder. After regaining control over my fleeting mind, I concentrated on what the noise was, but came up empty. I tried listening, and figured it was coming from my right. I moved right a bit, and nearly smashed my face into my sister's door. Oh yeah that reminds me..... My sister is Mia, she was 11 at the time. Now she's 16 and good lord has she grown up! She's got full large breasts, at least a C, long slender legs, a cute little bubble butt you just wanna spank, and gorgeous, flowing auburn colored hair. Not to mention her bright sparkling emerald eyes, and sexy smattering of freckles across her cheeks. She's a little shy, but if you get to know her and she's comfortable around ...

... you, she's the exact opposite. Now that you've gotten an understanding of her, we'll get back to the story. Upon the near demolishment of my face, I realized the noises were coming from beyond her door, getting louder and deeper by the second. I peeked through the key hole on the old door and saw, to my astonishment, Mia laid on her bed naked. Her little breasts looked to be little more than mosquito bites, and her auburn hair laid over them like drapes. Then I noticed what was going on down below.Her fingers were in her.... what was that? Why didn't she have a pokey thing-y like me? And it was then that i realized that she had what the boys at school called, a vaw-gine-ahh? While watching this whole fiasco, I noticed my poker had gotten hard again. Why did it do that? Did it think I was in danger? Did it know I was doing something bad? While I was thinking of the possibilities as to why it did that, Mia all of a sudden got really loud, and then with one final grunt, she collapsed onto the bed, covered in a sheen of sweat lit by the moonlight. She looked positively beautiful in the glow of night, and while I was absorbed by her beauty, I almost didn't notice her standing up and approaching the door. I jumped back from the door, slamming my spine into the wall opposite the door, and ran like my life depended on it back to my room, being careful as to not slam the door behind me. My breath was like that of a pro athletes after playing a big game. I heard my sister passing by my ...