1. It Needed Doin' - Lamarr WIlson


    Date: 7/14/2024, Categories: Loving Wives, Author: byWandering_Mongol

    ... understand your need to save your son, but this isn't happening." Narvaez said, stepping in even closer. "I will get that information, or I will arrest you. If you are impeding a federal investigation, then you should know..."
    
    Still smiling benignly while nodding, Damar waved off what she was saying, signaling he knew.
    
    Then he held his hands out, wrists close together, in a classic 'cuff-me' gesture.
    
    "Then arrest me."
    
    Narvaez stared at the detective, while he looked like he was patiently waiting.
    
    "...Mierda."
    
    Damar nodded, signifying he understood. Kiki just got a little angrier for it.
    
    "If we've established that, I suggest you go back to your hotel, and pack clothes for a few days." Damar said, sounding like he understood her feelings. "We have to travel. By the time you get back, I'll have made arrangements. I'm already packed."
    
    Narvaez had to process this for a couple of seconds. Then she had to tell herself to calm down for a couple more.
    
    Then she turned and with the determination to not let this man see how much he had rattled her, she walked out of the office.
    
    Damar sat there, hands clasped in his semi-standing lap, as he analyzed everything he had just learned about Agent Karen Narvaez. He was going to have his hands full, he thought.
    
    "Well?" asked the Chief as he stood in his own doorway.
    
    "She's gone to pack." Damar said. "I need to arrange a plane trip."
    
    AFTERWORD
    
    I was a bit torn about which category to put this one. ...
    ... Loving Wives, since this is an extended Divorce Aftermath story for Damar, DL and Shawna, or in the Non-Erotic category.
    
    I like the feedback in Loving Wives, I think there's more discerning readers, and writers, there. Better communicators, than what I see in other categories. "I spanked to this!" is not what I'm looking for. Sometimes I get feedback along the lines of "This wasn't erotic!" or "I couldn't get off to this!", and that's fair. Accepted.
    
    There's more coming. I've got more of this story. It's scripted out. I've got the ending. No, this wasn't the ending. Don't worry, I'm not turning it into a buddy-travel story.
    
    Yes, there's holes in this one. I know it. Don't worry, I'm working on it.
    
    I hope some of you caught my homage. It's a little on-the-nose, but I couldn't resist.
    
    I'm happy to be writing Damar Freeman again. I'd had another story lined up for him, but when I got the barrage of comments after IND: Corso, and I looked at what I'd left myself, this seemed right.
    
    I'll be getting to Theo Miller soon.
    
    Kiki Narvaez is going to be in your face.
    
    Yes, you'll find out what happened to Jean Mattolo. Wow, some people really want to know what happened there.
    
    The Chief, I'm setting up for later use. He's based on Real People, and some of you may recognize his type. I gave clues.
    
    Who would guess I'd be on Literotica, writing crime drama? Not my usual fare, but I'm really enjoying it. I'm drawing on personal experiences and people I've known and do ...