Breaking the Rules
Date: 7/5/2024,
Categories:
Loving Wives,
Author: byshirukien
... remain stationary while she recoiled in surprise.
"That's way heavier than it looks." She complained, rubbing her lower back. Walking over, Elena bent to the package, carefully leveraging it into her arms. Katelyn wasn't wrong, it weighed quite a bit. Hauling it inside, she set it down on the couch, tearing the tape off.
Inside the box were two large stone tablets, plain save for the words engraved on their faces:
Rule 1
'If at any time I decide your outfit isn't sexy enough for the venue- and that includes your bra and panties- then I reserve the right to change it.'
Rule 2
'What happens in the Starlight Lounge stays in the Starlight Lounge.'
Rule 3
'That bracelet stays on, no matter what.'
Rule 4
'As long as you're not cheating, you have to go along with anything a stripper asks you to.'
Rule 5
'You can't end the night until you've touched every stripper at least once.'
Rule 6
'The Maid of Honour is the boss; what she says, goes. (3 times)'
Rule 7
'There are as many rules as I decide there are.'
Rule 8
'It's only cheating if it goes in your pussy.'
Rule 10
'Enjoy his cock'
Katelyn eyed the tablets, an eyebrow cocked.
"Wait, was there really not a ninth rule when I made that one? How does Hayley remember all of this stuff anyway? If you really think about it, you failed several of these, though, right? I don't feel like anybody has brought that up."
Elena laughed as she hefted the second tablet- it was ...
... solid stone without question.
"Where can we put these? I doubt our walls could hold them up."
Katelyn immediately stopped her huffing and puffing, eyes immediately darting around the room.
"I have an idea, give me that one."
End
Author's Note:
Hey folks, thanks for giving this story a chance! I just want to take this opportunity to source some advice from you good readers in the comment section. As you may have noticed, this story is long, easily several times longer than I ever intended or expected it to be- I just couldn't bring myself to stop writing until I had properly wrapped up a few of the more central story arcs, though, as you may have noticed, I've left a few things dangling for future stories to pick up. If you've made it to the end, regardless of whether you liked it or not, I am flattered. That's where my first question comes in- should I republish this story as three separate ones, in line with the three Acts it's already broken up into, or do you think it's fine as a monolith? Any input on that prospect is welcome.
My second question goes beyond this story- if you read it and liked it, first of all, thank you, but second of all- are there any characters or ideas you'd like me to explore more in-depth? I'm kind of digging this shared universe thing I did with my first story, the admittedly much rougher 'Some Harmless Competition', and this one, so I expect that my next story, if and when that gets made, will probably feature some familiar ...