How to Write a Terrible Sex Story - Sex Stories

How to Write a Terrible Sex Story

... what status they have with other characters. Sometimes the status will change (ex. Nicole becomes lower status to Adam when she becomes really emotional and clings to him) and boom, you have the makings of an interesting story. Source: "After School Part 2" by raj007 So, make a story well-written with good spelling, grammar and punctuation, check. If it's not just a stroke story, don't always make it about the sex, check. Make each character unique and have status, check. Let's go back to realism. As mentioned, I had to have a reason why Adam got laid in my first chapter, and more often than not, a reason is needed. You're writing a story, and unless it's a fantasy with either mind control or medieval times orcs or something, odds are you're making it realistic. People have reasons for wanting to have sex with others. A lot of people need to have a reason before becoming remotely interested in the other person. Some people are looking for love before sex. This should be factored in. Some people want casual sex, sure, but even then it's usually with people they already know, and huge point, it's a *gradual process*. Even if the events of sex are sudden, it's gradual. A story about a female friend suddenly wanting a suck the male protagonist off is not realistic, and becomes a stroke story in its own right, because it's all about the sex again. The sex loses its novelty, the pleasure of including sex in your latest chapter turns into mundanity, etc. Great way for writing a ...

... terrible porn story. So, if a backstory isn't given upfront when sex happens, maybe make it happen throughout the story, slowly but surely telling the guy's backstory, or the girl's, and have the reader figure out where the turning point was, where sex first entered the minds of an otherwise platonic pair of friends, because that is crucial in a character relationship. You don't just need strong character personalities and status for a rewarding sex scene - you need the bond between them too. "Sex takes place between the ears." Find a way to make your reader understand the feelings beyond 'he put his flesh inside my flesh' amongst the two people. This is why I can't wrap my head around "The Adventures of John and Holly." Sorry, it's not a good story. Sorry, commenters saying the writer should 'write a book' - what you'll get is the same sex scene over and over with different people in different places. Notice a few things about that story - aside from announcements that are just words like 'When I'm out of college I want to marry you' (which interestingly doesn't feel as important to the reader as it should), the relationship between John and Holly beyond a few chapters in really doesn't change. Notice that the sex scenes keep involving more and more people (in a sex-centric universe! Imagine that!) in order to raise the stakes. Why? Because nothing else is raising the stakes. There's no real plot beyond 'people have sex and make porn in college' and it's frankly a long stroke ...